My poetry teecher, Jeter, has gotta really neat-o post up about words that rhyme with "Jeter." So that gives me an idea about how to write anuther poem for Ariel: out of words that rhyme with both "Ariel" and "Mao." Lessee, I think I can do this....
My girlfriend's purr-etty Ariel
She's a tortie girlcat bombshell
Like I said, she doesn't smell
With her, I'd frolick inna dell.
She's sweet to me, her Chairman Mao
Whenevver I see her, I say "Wow."
For her I'd go to the hoosegow
I wanna give her a kissie now.
Ginormous purrs and love to my #1 girl! I hope you like it!
Hmmmm, Marilyn just told me my li'l poem's got two "quatrains." Well, I'll take her word fur it, I still don't know mucha that poetry terminolagies.
11 comments:
I like your poem for Ariel. I'm sure Marilyn will teach you all you need to know about poetry, and Jeter will, too.
Very nice poem, Mao. :) Both you and your sister Marilyn are very talented!
Chairman Mao I love this poem.You can kiss me anytime(blushing).
Love and kitty kisses Ariel
So sweet! I am pretty sure you will not need to go to the hoosegow. But it is very nice that you would do it for your beautiful Ariel.
Mao, you are a true romantic. I am sure Ariel will love this.
Very impressive, Mao! You know, Nostradamus wrote quatrains and he could predict the future. Maybe now you can do that too.
George
hi mao, that's very nice poetry!
a quatrain is a set of four lines that go together. you have two sets of four lines that go together, so you have two quatrains!
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--suz
wow ... wutta grate poem. yer a quick studee, mao.
wut'z a "hoosegow"?
laffin an laffin!
luv--yer grate frend--jh
I was wondering the same thing as Jeter Harris. Your poem is very clever because it all rhymes.
Very impressive poetry MaoMao
I always knew you were a softie
*~Princesss
Wow, you're a poet and didn't know it. Nice rhymes for pretty Ariel.
~Jake
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